2011년 5월 6일 금요일

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Every student can benefit from engaging in extracurricular activities. In-class curriculums have clear limits on their kinds, form and their benefits. Those activities are inevitably biased on academic and theoretical knowledge. Therefore, extracurricular activities are necessary to supplement social and practical ability of students. For example, students can learn how to cooperate through extracurricular activities. When students play team sport as an extracurricular activity, they can learn to be unselfish and to have responsibility on their own parts in order to achieve success of the whole team. Such learning gives students life-long benefits; helping them not only during their school life, but also after graduation when they become social members. Students aren’t able to learn such importance and skills of cooperation on regular curriculum in-class activities are mostly consisted of individual studying and thinking. As shown in this example, extracurricular works are advantageous for students in that it teaches students practical knowledge. Thus, students should actively engage in extracurricular activities.

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